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| John Nyman 2006-07-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is very intriguing. The themes of darkness here are mixed really well with the themes of love and loss, and it blends very well. In terms of feedback for the rest, I really picture something rich and of coruse dark, full of grim reality and also lighter flashbacks. Just some general ideas that can probably be applied to any specific plot you might come up with. |