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| Divisionred 2008-07-06 ch 3,  | abusegreat story thanks |
| Divisionred 2008-05-18 ch 7, | abuseI hope that you willcontinue this story...youy left it at a very emotional part..Evelyn being molested and used by a teacher that also had his friends raping her...how awful...when I read stories like this I just want to find that MF and dip his ** in acid then that ** willnot be raping anyone else.Pleaase finish the story becuase I need to know that Evelyn and Mr Green find true love and that she gets over this.Also, it appears that the boss' son is making his moves on her as well and she probably can't defenc her self, but please have her slap the ** oput of that MF. Thanks |
| Twilight-Ember 2008-02-16 ch 7, | abuseOh my! I absolutely love your tone of writing and its simplicity! You can convey the meaning of the story easily so that it flows flawlessly to the reader. It is a hard thing to do, and you pull it off so nicely! I love the character development so far, and I definately look forward to your next update! So, keep writing and keep inspiring! |
| ZenBabe 2007-08-28 ch 7, | abuseaah!! I'm dying for Nate and Evelyn to get together!! I love Annie too, she's pretty hilarious! I like her relationship w/ Nate, too!! Great chapter! I cannot wait for the next one tho, it sounds very exciting! so update soon!! |
| JusticeWriter 2007-08-25 ch 7, | abuseThis chapter wasn't bad. I can't wait for the next one. |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-08-25 ch 7, | abuseNo! This was fantastic! I really like Annie; she's funny. x) haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter. =D Update soon? -Lqd |
| stranger with your doorkey 2007-08-25 ch 7, | abuseyay! ev and nate tension! i definately admire him for not staying - i don't know if i would have had that much self control. :) hurry up and update! dinner's coming up! ~angelface04 |
| mrskelley 2007-08-24 ch 7, | abuseGreat Update! I'm glad she opened up to Nathan..Annie is hilarious! |
| JusticeWriter 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseLoved it. :) |
| ZenBabe 2007-08-12 ch 6, | abuseWOW! Those last 2 chapters were GREAT! I love the evolution of Eve and Nathan's re-getting to know each other (if that made any sense AT ALL)!! This last chapter was just so great, especially how you ended it with the confrontation and then her finally opening up to him. I absolutely loved it! Update soon! GREAT JOB! |
| mrskelley 2007-08-11 ch 6, | abuseWOW...so many emotions...great update! |
| Writing4Eternity 2007-08-11 ch 6, | abuseShe's not weak. Ill like this story ALOT more if it wasnt for the cussing. |
| stranger with your doorkey 2007-08-11 ch 6, | abuseahh! yes! #1 - and update, i can't believe it! and #2 - evelyn and nate are actually TALKING. this is so amazing ;). i can't wait for an update! ~stranger |
| Liquid-Sorrow 2007-08-11 ch 6, | abuseintense. i really liked this chapter. they're actually getting somewhere! =D update soon? -lqd |
| grumpirah 2007-06-03 ch 5, | abuseShe is being super dumb. I know it may be hard for her to look past her own issues but there are way too many signs that say her client is lying. Make her smarten up, dumb women can be really annoying and can you get Mike get whats coming to him soon too? He's just a a*hole. |