 BlueAki 2009-09-16 . chapter 6OMG! how scary for her to go through something like that's as a child. I completely understand why she left Nathan now. He's such a good guy! |
 AlfortJen 2009-08-06 . chapter 7Great story can't wait for more |
 Connie 2009-02-12 . chapter 7 Awesome story but im sorry for Evelyn update please!! |
 Divisionred 2008-07-06 . chapter 3great story thanks |
 Divisionred 2008-05-18 . chapter 7I hope that you willcontinue this story...youy left it at a very emotional part..Evelyn being molested and used by a teacher that also had his friends raping her...how awful...when I read stories like this I just want to find that MF and dip his ** in acid then that ** willnot be raping anyone else.Pleaase finish the story becuase I need to know that Evelyn and Mr Green find true love and that she gets over this.Also, it appears that the boss' son is making his moves on her as well and she probably can't defenc her self, but please have her slap the ** oput of that MF. Thanks |
 Twilight-Ember 2008-02-16 . chapter 7Oh my! I absolutely love your tone of writing and its simplicity! You can convey the meaning of the story easily so that it flows flawlessly to the reader. It is a hard thing to do, and you pull it off so nicely!
I love the character development so far, and I definately look forward to your next update!
So, keep writing and keep inspiring! |
 ZenBabe 2007-08-28 . chapter 7aah!! I'm dying for Nate and Evelyn to get together!! I love Annie too, she's pretty hilarious! I like her relationship w/ Nate, too!! Great chapter! I cannot wait for the next one tho, it sounds very exciting! so update soon!! |
 JusticeWriter 2007-08-25 . chapter 7This chapter wasn't bad. I can't wait for the next one. |
 Liquid-Sorrow 2007-08-25 . chapter 7No! This was fantastic! I really like Annie; she's funny. x) haha. I can't wait to read the next chapter. =D
Update soon?
-Lqd |
 stranger with your doorkey 2007-08-25 . chapter 7yay! ev and nate tension! i definately admire him for not staying - i don't know if i would have had that much self control. :)
hurry up and update! dinner's coming up!
~angelface04 |
 mrskelley 2007-08-24 . chapter 7Great Update! I'm glad she opened up to Nathan..Annie is hilarious! |
 JusticeWriter 2007-08-13 . chapter 1Loved it. :) |
 ZenBabe 2007-08-12 . chapter 6WOW! Those last 2 chapters were GREAT! I love the evolution of Eve and Nathan's re-getting to know each other (if that made any sense AT ALL)!! This last chapter was just so great, especially how you ended it with the confrontation and then her finally opening up to him. I absolutely loved it! Update soon! GREAT JOB! |
 mrskelley 2007-08-11 . chapter 6WOW...so many emotions...great update! |
 Writing4Eternity 2007-08-11 . chapter 6She's not weak. Ill like this story ALOT more if it wasnt for the cussing. |