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| Reviews for On Air |
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   brinalovesyouxx 11/28/12 . chapter 30Funny and cute story. And writing from different character's point of view :) awesome job and i look forward to reading more of your stories :D xx |
| TheClassicCriminal 9/27/12 . chapter 21 Yup, you got his opinion of a big family right on. That's exactly how I talk about my family, sometimes interesting, other times extremely annoying. I'm right in the middle too! But I have a few more siblings than him. You also got her reaction just right. That's my favorite part of having a big family, other peoples reaction. :) funny story! |
| infinitystar 9/2/12 . chapter 1 i love this story! please write more! |
| twibbit 8/12/12 . chapter 30 ;)))) |
| xMunchy 8/11/12 . chapter 30 Great story! It was *very* enjoyable to read. A few mistakes herre and there, but so few and far between that I've completely forgotten about them! Cerainly adds a new perspective to the story I've been working on-this is probably the first story I've ever seriously tried to write. Your story gave me a few tips on tones and personalities. Thanks - I've always thought that I was a pretty good writer, but that's mainly because I am SURROUNDED by people who either aren't interested in writing at all, or sucks at grammar and all that. This story really helped me, and in such an ejoyable way, too! Again, thanks! P.S. I've stayed up, from 2 AM to 8 AM reading this. I should probably go to sleep, but that would totally thwart my plan to regulate my sleeping schedule. Oh, well. Waking up at 5, it is! |
| ClosetReader 7/16/12 . chapter 2 Not a fan of Lena right now. She's so rude and can't even admit it when she's wrong. I hate people like that. I like the premise of the story though! |
| Insomnia Breeds Insanity 5/25/12 . chapter 1 Love this story so far! You write very descriptively, and this flows more easily than some stuff that's been published by big publishing houses. |
| lavishlysimple 3/31/12 . chapter 13 WHAT THE F! is Raphael really gay? hahahahahahahahaahahhaahaha.. god he's really confusing me... |
| mustangchic 2/19/12 . chapter 2 i do hope you realized by now its not good to stereotype based on clothes. |
| anon 2/19/12 . chapter 2 So cute! I'm accustomed to FanFiction, not FictionPress, but i find I'm coming to like it. This is a great story, and I actually laughed out loud reading it. Exited to see what's to come! |
| kokode 10/1/11 . chapter 24 I love the Ryan-Mario pairing! Kyaaaaaaaaa! Hahahahaha! They're sooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet... :" |
| There's-A-Star-In-My-Hand 3/8/11 . chapter 30 i really loved this story! you should keep writing! love you x |
| KMx0x 12/29/10 . chapter 30 Absolutely loved this story (: Lena and Raphael are perfect together. I squealed and had a mini heart attack when they got together again. Amazing work. (: -K |
| honey splattered brains 7/1/10 . chapter 10 POOR RAPHAEL XDD |
| ReallyAboutWaffleRiots 6/21/10 . chapter 8 That was not a filler chapter, that was genius. |
