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| W. Griffin 2008-03-14 ch 1,  | abusethis is a great poem. i especially liked the spacing in line 4... that adds a lot of depht to an otherwise-boring line! good job! -w. griffin |
| Surmising Notations 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseGreat imagery, good flow. The only thing that I would fix is that I would add your punctuation. You properly capitalized at the beginning of each sentence, but didn't put in the periods. It's very well done and I liked it. |