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Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-08-07
ch 16,
Aw, it's over already? I really liked this story alot, however I would have liked to read the rest of Daniel's letters. Maybe you can write of story of how one of Lizzie's sons finds the book of letters? It's just a suggestion . . . ;)

Anyway, just as in "The Listener," your characters are well-rounded and are likeable (even the horrible Huggetts!). The entire setting is realistic. And it's always a plus to have a semi-happy ending at the conclusion.

ABH
rikku-lover
2006-08-07
ch 16,
amazing ending mikii wander if you would right another story with lizzy in. like just after the world war to see what she felt like the minute the war had ended

i realy loved reading your story infact i loved it so much it is better than any other story i have read. i read your storys to. they were also very good but not as good as this one.

i think you could become a writer when you grow up. infact i think this story could even get published.

can i make a suggestion for your next story. but you might not like it because you need your insperation.

talk to you soon my brilliant writer

from heatherx
atreyu love
2006-08-05
ch 1,
sad summary but sounds interesting/
Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-08-05
ch 15,
I liked Mouse's statement at the very end of the chapter.

No! The story can't be almost over . . . Will you be writing another WWI novel after this one?

I hope Lydia doesn't get hurt in the munitions facotry.

ABH

PS: Thanks for reviewing!
MiserableRevolutionary
2006-08-05
ch 15,
Aw...so good. I like it! Is there more?
rikku-lover
2006-08-05
ch 15,
what's going to happen next i realy want to knowi loved every single second of that story
rikku-lover
2006-08-05
ch 7,
here is a reveiw jist for my favourite writer.this is a nail biting story i always wanna no what happends next
rikku-lover
2006-08-05
ch 13,
o no plz make up with lydia. lizzy your her frnd
Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-08-03
ch 14,
That was positively haunting, wonderful but haunting. It was nice to have a break from normal diaglogue and snipits of missives.

Two questions: (1) Are we going to hear about Lydia's job? And, (2) How long will this story be?

ABH
rikku-lover
2006-08-03
ch 14,
whats happens next ! i realy want to know it is so exciting. my heart is is pounding with excite ment. you have to write another and another one after thatit is amazing.lovefromheather
rikku-lover
2006-08-02
ch 1,
heloo miki great story one of my favourites. i think you have the ability to become an author like jacqeline wilson and rahl doal.sorry i cant spellfrmheatherx
Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-07-31
ch 13,
Whoaza! That was an emotional chapter. It's very well written, too, but you knew that already. :D

ABH
Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-07-29
ch 12,
This is one of my favorite chapters. I can already see some affection between Mouse and Liz. It was sweet when Mouse defended her against his father.

However, I have a slight problem. You mentioned that Mouse is Jewish, right? Because, some of the sames (Israel, Zvi, ect.) are of Jewish origin. So, why are they eating bacon? I mean, bacon comes from pigs and most Jews don't eat pork-products because it isn't kosher.

It isn't much of a big deal (because I'm not Jewish, I'm Christian.). But I did find it a little odd.

ABH

PS: I can hardly wait to see Lydia in a factory!
Angelic Brunette Hermione
2006-07-28
ch 11,
Oh my God! What a shocker! Oh, I like. Mouse and Lizzie are lovely together because they are both confused young people who can help eachother conquer their woes.

Will Lizzie be joining a munitions facotry, like my Vicky? Lizzie doesn't seem quite as foolish as Vicky, but just as determined. So that's why I thought so.

ABH

PS: Thanks for the review!
Winry Rockbell
2006-07-27
ch 11,
Thanks so much for the frequent updates!I love the route this story is taking--Lizzy is so confused, but Mouse is so sweet, so gentle, he might be able to help Lizzy get through her bad times.

Thanks, too, for explaining Mouse's origins (and explaining the last name!) :)

One comment about your story: I really like the choice of using first-person to tell the story. I feel as though I really know Lizzy and we feel her pain and we can really emphasize with her.

I cheered for Lizzy when she rejected Edward--and when she told off her horrible Mother! How long do you plan this to be? (You may have told us already, but I have short-term memory problems!)
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