Sweet and short. I love it.

I just read the first chapter and I really can't wait to read the rest.

this is a really good start. her friend isn't wrong about the whole guy thing over the internet.

~Sorrow~

It's very sweet :) keep it up *thumbs up*

hah, i really liked it.very cute

aw, sweet ending dear.

rushrushrush.i wonder when the online guy will come into play

interesting ending on this. this chapter sets up for so much more

hah, that advice and situation is a bit too cliche for me

Hey, this sounds awesome, but unfortunatley, this all the time i have for reading, so i'll get back to you i promise

Hello, hello, hello!

Ahh, I seem to be not the only one who went on a long hiatus! LOL! I'm glad you are back with another brilliantly entertaining story, though. At first when I noticed you had updated, I have to admit I thought the plotline a bit cliche...but, then I had another thought screeching at me: DON'T JUDGE THE STORY BEFORE YOU'VE EVEN READ IT, DOOFUS BRAIN *whack*

Jeez, my body is so abusive towards me! ;__; Anyhoo...just know I like it thus far and it really captures one's interest. Maybe it's because of the realism of the characters. They don't act animatedly, their actions sound exactly how any other normal teenager would react to finding a really cute boy! *yay* So, I'm sorry I haven't been online enough to catch up on any of your poetry!! I'll try making a better effort anytime I can squeeze in some free-time...!

Just a few little mistake I caught: you spelt pedophile with an 'a,' when there is none> =P hehe

See yah with cookies and turnips!! (I'm turning 16 on August 7th *hint*)

Wing Chant AKA Kayla

Brilliant story! Totally loved it. You should write more and I promise to read and review more often! Really enjoyed this, you are such a talent writer! luv vikki x

God what a bitch! Blimey, another good twist though! VX

Good chapter again. I like the way all of your characters are believable. All their reactions seem to be how you would expect people to react. I have to go out but I'll read the rest later. Keep up the good work, I love your stories hun! Vxx

Wow great poem! I like the twist of Charlie's dad coming back. Vxx