really good!

Do you "lie" as you wait? This is a real question from someone nearly five times your age who is questioning how much of what we tell ourselves is "true." Good poem with a real question embedded in it.

Peace, Doc

I like the feeling of this poem. This question we have sometimes. Is there anything I can do to control my life, or is it just coming to me?

good job, though the rhyme seems perhaps to simplistic. contemplate, plate? then again, maybe not. thanks for the heads up, fixed it

Thank you for the review Hate. Is there anything else that I can call you? XD

I like the repetition of the opening and closing lines in this poem, but the rhyming seems somewhat strained.

it's a good poem and a good writing scheme, i'll give you that. i have to ask though- how is it too late, if you've just been lying and waiting?

Hopeless, its too late? I wish it was never too late. Bold writing! Write on, my friend.

Very good D! I like this, the way it rhymes and all. It is very deep in meaning. To be able to write with meaning and make it rhyme takes real talent in my opinion.

Sad... write on!

*::Cat::*

abd what would you fate be?

Nice Poem! I liked it! Great Job!