Reviews for The Wondrous Washin Shower Rangers!

Reviews For: The Wondrous Washin Shower Rangers!

artificial destiny 2008-02-24 ch 1,	abusehey sorry about the confusion with the review game :) > < i procrastinated over my ap bio work to write my story so now im working like crazy hope you dont mind that i didnt read your longer works! i really like this work even though im more of an introductory/set everything first kind of writer, this was an easy and light read. (something i really needed) something you can work on... hmm well maybe you can have a more vivid scene of how the three evils- grime dirt and filth- are destroying the city. maybe if they figure out their duties while facing the evils, it would be a more dynamic scene? anyways, i really liked it! keep writing! -artificial destiny
Otaku42 2007-12-07 ch 1,	abuseGO GO SHOWER RANGERS! I haven't even finished the first paragraph and you've already put a smile on my face. ...XX06? I bet that's like the 20XX of the Megaman games. Nice touch. :) ...Woah, a hundred-year-old toilet. My God, I can't imagine how bad that must smell. ...'colored a disgusting greenish brown'? Eep. That's what you get for messing with ancient artifact toilets, I guess. And another one's a 'brown round lump'- for once, I'm glad there isn't too much detail shudder Truly terrifying foes, to be certain... '...he was in his bathroom after all'. I'm a little confused by this. Where did he think he was? Oh, well. ...Ooh, rubbing the toothpaste tube makes Bath come out- just like a genie! Cool. ...'waiting for minutes!' Wow, Shampoo is impatient. At least she has two good friends... Soap and Water. I really could see this as a fun kitschy show- maybe even live action, if all the actors dressed in appropriate costumes. ...a flash flood! Now it's getting exciting. I like giving this advice to anyone I review, but more detail always makes the story come even more alive. You could even go over the top, with lots of silly dramatic descriptions, like the old Adam West Batman shows. ...I wonder what 'Shower Powers' do? Gotta be interesting, to say the least... And in three convenient silver disks! With knobs! Knobs...of JUSTICE! ..."IT'S WASHIN' TIME!" In a word...wicked. This looks like a silly fun story. I can't say I spent a whole lot watching the Power Rangers, but this story really seems to catch the absurdist spirit of the concept. I do wonder if their costumes will be color-coordinated like the show. Red for the leader, pink for the girl, green for the Irish kid, yellow for the Asian kid, and black for the African-American... Good luck with the rest of this story. I look forward to reviewing more chapters! ~Otaku42
L3G3nD 2007-10-26 ch 1,	abuseLOL what the hell! Your story is so-so hilarious! Monsters which caused flash flood! LOL, gosh I couldn't think of any funnier thing compared to yours. There is some slight errors in spelling, but other than that nothing has come into my attention. I admit, there is, lol. Your sense of humor, that's all! Well, there's something I want to ask. Did you have a plan for the chapter 2 for this story? I guess you wouldn't give up such a funny story, won't you? If you're free feel free to take a look at my story entitled 'Blind Love' though, but of course that is not an obligation. lol. Something to point out though, those rangers just accepted the fact too early! XD
Heaven-Ablaze-in-your-Eyes 2006-11-12 ch 1,	abuserofl!! this is hilarious...i decided to take a break from writing my thesis on avarice n this was exactly what i needed...great job n yea id definitely go for episode 2...im not a big power rangers person but the shower rangers sound more my style! keep going =)
Ironic Presence 2006-11-01 ch 1,	abuseLOL! Oh, my gosh, that was so funny. Thank you. I don't watch Power Rangers, but that was a great parody. When I saw the title and read the summary, I was like, "this has got to be so random... LET'S READ IT!" and so I did. Loved it. lol...
Amaya Windsong 2006-09-25 ch 1,	abusehaha this is great! Soap is awesome. On another note, I love the book "The House on Mango Street". That's the book that inspired me to start writing in the vignette style. Cisneros is an amazing author. This piece was great! Keep writing.
controv3rsyxx 2006-09-16 ch 1,	abuselol this was funny (: i enjoyed the silly parts, especially the names. and thanks for giving me a review(:
call me bitch 2006-07-23 ch 1,	abusei think it's wonderfully humorous. i like it. it sounds out of the world extraordinary.
lizzy 2006-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abusethis was so awesome! it was sweet, and cute, but also interesting and actually had a plot, unlike many other stories i've read using this tone. good job! make a second episode, im curious to find out what happens :)
Bishop Tomb 2006-07-08 ch 1,	abuseyour writing is pure hearted enjoyment, and I don't normally read this kind of stuff. Your a good writer, much better then me. Please review my stuff. Thanks Bishop Tomb
Kitsune Boy 2006-07-08 ch 1,	abuseThat was so funny. OI think it was how corny it was lol.

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