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| Jarlaxe 2006-12-19 ch 1, | abusem very good i like it very souly haha good job! |
| Beautifuly Broken 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abusePYRO! LOL, its good, I like it! |
| Freed by Mercy 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseThis poem has some nice imagery, something your three most recent poems lack. It is better to show than tell. Concretely yet metaphorically describe the feelings and sensations rather than just stating them. This will make your poetry sparkle! |
| Maraka of the Fae 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abusecoolio...pawease r&r some of mine |
| hateandkill-D 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseCool. I like this. |