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| Benjamin - To Be Deleted 2006-09-03 ch 1,   | "whirlpool of emotions" See, there it is again! AARGH! |
| Lauren Wolfe 2006-07-14 ch 1, | A little too...forced, to say simply...though the meaning was well-sought...keep on writing! ^_^ |
| Maraka of the Fae 2006-07-08 ch 1, | short, sweet, and simple...cute |