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| greenGalilee 2007-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseI adore this poem! It describes that summer laziness just perfectly, though the words seem to also say something beyond that. Excellent work! |
| Violet Marx 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuselight and giggle-filled. I love it. |
| Aslan Israel 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abusemakes me smile. :-) |
| coal and marigolds 2006-07-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat Rolling Stones reference. Lovely piece of summer. |
| sleeping Pisces 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThis kinda reminds me of a haiku because it seems to say a lot more than the words I just read. Weirdly, I seem to be finding a lot of summer-related poems right now. You must be American or from Canada or something. Oh, yes, I did like the poem very much in case I didn't make myself clear. Peace, Daze |
| classic violet 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuselove it. it's so... airy (not a word, i know) and free. great job! |
| ode to a firefly 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseActually, my toenails are painted "Jam 'n' Jelly Pink." But close enough. Cute. ^.^ ♥Christine |
| breezy nostrils 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abusesummer sure makes ppl happy. i felt really happy until i thought about my ** up situation. ah well...what can ya do? anyway nice work. |
| Aquafied 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abusereminds me of christmas in july.why is it july, why not april? |
| boys kiss girls 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuse"and we like it" I love that last line. brilliant. I really get a good image of this it's so... happy for lack of a better word. =) |
| Talyth 2006-07-08 ch 1, | abuseAww, I really like this. It's so simple and unpretentious, but it's so *good*. I love that kind of poem :) It makes me all daydreamy and nostalgic for childhood summers... nice job indeed! *favorite stories listed* -Devon |