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| PenChewer 2006-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseHeyy!!wow!! this was a really good song, i like the way you worded the words and such, and i think it was neat at the end how it turned out to be yousongs are always hte best when there personal, anyways, it was good!UnsungAngelLove |
| rust phoenix 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseYou used an interesting style in this, I liked it. It's very powerful. I liked the first and third paragraph the best. You put a lot of emotion into this. |
| Freed by Mercy 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThis is powerful piece and very sad. I submitted a peice today named "Broken Ride" a metaphor about a dysfunctional family. You might want to check it out. |