Heyy!!wow!! this was a really good song, i like the way you worded the words and such, and i think it was neat at the end how it turned out to be yousongs are always hte best when there personal, anyways, it was good!UnsungAngelLove

You used an interesting style in this, I liked it. It's very powerful. I liked the first and third paragraph the best. You put a lot of emotion into this.

This is powerful piece and very sad. I submitted a peice today named "Broken Ride" a metaphor about a dysfunctional family. You might want to check it out.