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| an-entraced-pyromaniac 2006-08-13 ch 1,  | abusethat is exactly what i feel like with nick |
| nadorj 2006-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI can realte to this one! and i really like it! |
| Lemon Sorbet 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseRepetition works well, last line is very good... Keep it up! Lemonsausagex |
| Princess-anna57 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseWell written. The use of repetition in this works really well; the last two lines are very powerful! Good job! Write on! ~Anna~ ^_^ |
| Playing Games 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseHaha, nice. I like the repetition of every other line--I always like repetition. I love the last line, it twists the entire poem. It's like the author is hiding from their emotions. And I like the rhyming. Even though parts of this poem are cliche, I still like it alot. --Ovch. |