The format looks a little strange, but I like the poem and the topic. Haha, pretentious girl. ;) Nice work!

Wonderful. The *sound* of the words is just so lovely, with the alliteration/semi-rhyming/vivid words and imagery, AND it also flows perfectly. I'm not sure if I'm making any sense here but it works so well.

I also have to say I took a wicked kind of glee from the last line, because the tone of it is just so delightful. And the rhyme just doubled the glee.

Thank you. I enjoyed this a lot. I think I'm going to go check out your other pieces. :D

oh i'm so glad to find something new from you. i read it before realizing the author.

it seemed familiar.

brilliant two stanzas that flowed perfectly. imagery and rhyme is fantastic as always. it just worked so well and gave such a clear image. definitely on the favorites list.

welcome back? it's been awhile.

.:midnight:.

Oh!! I loves it. I absolutely do. Great to see more stuff from you, also... *grins and waves all friendly-liek*

It's fabulous. I loves it. Me likes!! lots. And I like the semi-rhyme thing going on there also. IT'S SO GREAT!! Oh I like reading it, I just read it for the third time...

...isn't it funny how I can write so much and not really say anything? Ah well, as long as it's not inane and pretentious XD

My final words on it: It's great. I hope to see more stuff from you at some stage. This is cool. I just love the attitude, the... something... it's deep, as well, or something. *tries in vain to explain self*

Eh bien...