Powerful piece. Would make a really great song. Beautiful work, well done! Vikki.

This is beautiful and heart twisting. You sum up how i've been feeling lately perfectly.

This song is so cool. Keep writing. You're really good.

Wow...this was really strong, it sounds like you had it pretty tough, but your hapy now which is good^_^ Thanks 4 mi review! Keep up the awesome work!

It's great. I'm glad you're back ^_^ Love the attitude in this one, as with the last poem... I can feel what you feel, realise your anger. I dunno... it's a great piece. *nodnod* *grin*

I'm so happy I can make you smile :)

~Aquila

Nice words, I can't say too much, i'm not a big fan of songs written down on here, there's no music to them so I can't appreciate the way you see it in your head, nor can I appreciate it myself as i'm no good at making up music to go with things.

Still, seems good.

Keep writing

Alan

Very well written, and very sad. Sounds like you had it rough. Some beautiful imagery and a nice play on words on the "So take your chains and have yourself a ball" :) very good stuff. take care and keep it up.