Fascinating. Your person is an optimist, I can tell. I wonder if that will get her into trouble, or keep her out, or have no effect whatsoever? Only time will tell...

wow! BS"D
I can see the hallway. this is awesome (and kinda creepy in a good way.)

Oh! I like this! I am very intrigued! I hope you keep going!

This is neatsy peatsy. You are a good writer. Nice descriptions. It is not boring, even though there is very little dialogue. But thats ok, cuz its interesting without dialogue. I think you should keep writing this story, and find out what is going on.
love,
Sissy Poo