Keep on writing it is soooooooo good.

when are you going to continue? IM DYIng heRE! :D please write another chapter. id love to see the story develop! :D

hey im new to fictionpress nd i luvd the whle story cnt wait to read the rest of the story:-)

This is amazing! I love it! Btw how old are you? You sound like a teenager since your writing about this stuff, but just in case you know. Its so good? Has it got published yet? xx

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Dude, you have a perfectly awesome story going on here. Keep going!

Why do they hate each other? Hmm... must read on...

I liked it. The plot line is creative, and interesting, and I like that she isn't your typical closet beautiful girl...she really is shy, throughout it all, and she's realistic.

i'm excited for the next chapter!

Lol, this is the first het (MxF) story I've read in a while, and I enjoyed it a lot. My high school life was never this interesting, but you've described it well. Very nice beginning.

I am hooked. More! I like your descriptions and true depictions. Continue.

This. Chapter. Is. EPIC. I loved it! Can't wait for the 13th! :D

Only thing I'm sad about, is theirs no Brandon in here. :(

aw..

update soon.

im loveing this story down to the last period.. ]

Ella's characters is absolutely awesome, and I loved the "You wish." at the end. Loved this chapter, update soon!

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I loved how Chloe stuck up for Dylan and how Dylan is already referring to her as his sister. I can't wait to read more about Matthias's past with Adrienne and Dylan. It seems like there is more backstory that is causing tension with these three characters and I am intrigued to find out what.

Is just me or does Chloe seem to less awkward and growing a backbone as the story goes on! I love it update soon please.