|Reviews for When It All Falls Down|
| Jay 9/2/12 . chapter 9
Keep on writing it is soooooooo good.
| Fiona 11/27/11 . chapter 9
when are you going to continue? IM DYIng heRE! :D please write another chapter. id love to see the story develop! :D
| lilmisstzalwyz3 8/11/11 . chapter 2
hey im new to fictionpress nd i luvd the whle story cnt wait to read the rest of the story:-)
| Fiona 7/3/11 . chapter 1
This is amazing! I love it! Btw how old are you? You sound like a teenager since your writing about this stuff, but just in case you know. Its so good? Has it got published yet? xx
| Girl 12/3/10 . chapter 9
| Haydron 10/21/10 . chapter 9
Dude, you have a perfectly awesome story going on here. Keep going!
| savor those enticing dreams 7/2/10 . chapter 2
Why do they hate each other? Hmm... must read on...
| savor those enticing dreams 7/2/10 . chapter 1
I liked it. The plot line is creative, and interesting, and I like that she isn't your typical closet beautiful girl...she really is shy, throughout it all, and she's realistic.
i'm excited for the next chapter!
| PencilSketchS 6/3/10 . chapter 1
Lol, this is the first het (MxF) story I've read in a while, and I enjoyed it a lot. My high school life was never this interesting, but you've described it well. Very nice beginning.
| Fields 4/12/10 . chapter 12
I am hooked. More! I like your descriptions and true depictions. Continue.
| Abandoned Cheerleaders 4/12/10 . chapter 12
This. Chapter. Is. EPIC. I loved it! Can't wait for the 13th! :D
Only thing I'm sad about, is theirs no Brandon in here. :(
| goodbyes 4/5/10 . chapter 12
im loveing this story down to the last period.. ]
| thinking.about.thinking 4/5/10 . chapter 12
Ella's characters is absolutely awesome, and I loved the "You wish." at the end. Loved this chapter, update soon!
| Melissa Brooks 4/4/10 . chapter 12
I loved how Chloe stuck up for Dylan and how Dylan is already referring to her as his sister. I can't wait to read more about Matthias's past with Adrienne and Dylan. It seems like there is more backstory that is causing tension with these three characters and I am intrigued to find out what.
| Typically Cliche 4/4/10 . chapter 12
Is just me or does Chloe seem to less awkward and growing a backbone as the story goes on! I love it update soon please.