I like Dylan. And Matthias (well, mainly his name) Good lord, I'm boy crazy this evening (I swear I'm not usually like this.)

Am loving the whole story idea. ;)

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The Toothpaste Fiend

oy oy, great story, me likey.

update soon ok?

I like this very much!! Please write more soon, I am very eager to find out what happens! :)

O, I love it.

Please do update soon, I'm looking forward to reading more.

Until then. (:

that was good, very funny! i liked the hitch hiker scene and her thought going haywire that he might want to murder her when the car stalled. also the bit about the door refusing to shut added a funny touch, specially when it did it for the second time. so chloe feels a bit threatened by michael, that he's taking her mum away, hopefully, eventually she gets reasured about this. update soon.

I like this chapter.I say they should hate each other because of some boy thing, you know, besides girls, something stupid (in girl's minds) but important in theirs.

good job so far. it has the potential to be a really good story since you can write well. so dylan and matt hate each other? hrm well maybe dylan's dad dumped matt's mom harshly?

This story is really great so far. I guess I like it so much because of how shy I am as person. But i really like the whole thing about Dylan and Matt being enemies since Chloe is going to be soon a step sister to Dyland and then her interest in Matt. Can't wait to read more!! This story is going to my favorite stories list!:)

I like the dream, it was well written, but a little overdone. I was a little confused at the transitioning, but otherwise, it was a wonderful chapter. Really cannot wait for more.

Wow, this looks like it's going to be really interesting. I like that your characters are pushing sterotype boundries. I hope you update soon, I wanna know what happens next!

So far so good, keep it up and you'll have a decent story. :-D

Very interesting, you can really write with style and flair. The characters aren't overdone, and it doesn't seem cliche at all! You're hinting t different things, and it adds to the story, and leaves the reader wanting to see more. No suggestions for now, will contact you if I get some brilliant idea (which I doubt).

this is great. I can't wait for the next chapter...

Why does Dylan and Matt hate each other- Just because of girls?

I say the parents should stay together happily, but make someone run away.