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Daedhira Dhna 2009-09-22 . chapter 1
more? please? If I ask really really really nicely? For a cookie?? and, btw - I WANNA HANDGUN CUSTOM MADE! PRETTYFUL!!
The Demon loveless 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
I like the start and have just finished Rainbow and love Xavier, are you going to update anytime soon?
CorpusCristi 2009-04-13 . chapter 1
More more more! I am perpetually enthralled by your intriguing characters, and of course can't wait for the next installment. Also, Trick? Best nickname for Patrick ever.
Rhinriael Blaze 2009-02-25 . chapter 1
Ooh, you got me hooked on this one. Very interesting. :) Keep writing!
Straight Pin 2008-11-29 . chapter 1
Umm... Are you ever going to update this? :D
JtheChosen1 2008-11-28 . chapter 1
holy cow! this is such a great way to start a new story off! i hope that u update it someday soon b/c it is totally badass!
Kei White 2008-11-20 . chapter 1
Oh please, please, give them a happy ending. With everything they both seem to have to go through to really want them to get their happy ending. I love how you begun this story and can't wait till the end. Please update soon.
AG 2008-10-26 . chapter 1
I would like to just let you know how much this story makes me happy, yet my heart ache. I love Trick and Ex, and I sincerely hope that you finish this story. It says in the summery that this is a re-write, so if the story will not be finished, would it be possible to read the original conclusion?
Thank you!

my email is:
autumn-annette-19 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Whats next, whats next.
Bea14 2008-08-31 . chapter 1
please write more! Trick is so intense. i love it. Ex has no idea who Trick really is. I look forward to your next update :)
kiboki-kun 2008-06-26 . chapter 1
This is a really great beginning, and it sounds like a great story. I hope you update soon..please?
KaiMeiHime 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
i love the beginning of this story!

update son PLEASE =)
ranchan-akari 2008-05-03 . chapter 1
*cries* It's been ages since you've updated! Please update this soon~! *offers cookies as bribe*
Mystik Wryter 2008-04-08 . chapter 1
Totally cool. I read this chapter a while back and thought it was interesting. Then I read Rainbow and now I'm desperate for you to finish this story. But I won't beg too much. I know that writing a story tends to take a while, especially considering how often my muse gets distracted. Good job and I hope you are able to finish this story one day.
Pundit 2008-02-21 . chapter 1
Not to sound to forward or anything, but: can I be your groupie?
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