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| firedraygon97 2008-06-01 ch 23, | abuseThis little sidestory is so sweet. I'm so glad you elaborated on it, instead of just having the condensed version from Dym in the story. Especially since it's from kid-Dym's POV. The reactions and language -- too cute, and heartbreaking at times. Lovely work. As for the main story, I like how Dym manipulates everyone by giving them a false prophecy. Now off to read the next Book! ~fd97 |
| True.Randomness 2008-03-23 ch 23, | abuseI love this series. The sidestory was very sweet and at the same time melancholic. This book was just as fun as the las one and like the last one, it was written very well. Not only that, but it didn't have much of a problem with scene and time shifting as the last one. I can't even remember when the shift was confusing. I can wait to read you next book and the rest of the story. |
| AlaskanNativeAngel 2008-02-19 ch 23, | abuseTook a lot longer then it should of me to get to the second part but I finally did and it was just as great as the first part! :D Read it all in one sitting. Hope this isn't the end. |
| lostinbetween 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abusehi! I'd just like to say that your story is wonderful... really... and the characters are... believable..(I'm not sure if that's the word)...I mean they could be real... and I like how it isn't all rainbows and butterflies but in the end it still makes you feel content and happy... and the story of the boy and the golden apples is just so cute... orignally I wanted to plead you to keep on writing but I saw on your homeside it's finished... (it is right? five books for five lands?)... so now I'm off reading... |
| Kitsune Luvr 2007-09-17 ch 23, anon. | abuseThis is a truly amazing story. And that last chapter, the apple side-story, that was so incredibly touching. Just wow. You write wonderfully. Hopefully you will continue with this series. I enjoy reading your writing very much. |
| Riosuu 2007-06-29 ch 22, anon. | abuseOMG I LOVE YOU!! haha sorry i don't usually leave reviews so feel very special I absolutely love your story because it has just about everything i adore in a fantasy novel I really can't wait until the next book hopefully a little more flamboyancy in your characters can crack me up best of luck Riosuu |
| leemya 2007-05-21 ch 23, | abuseYour stories are marvelous! When will the next book come out? Can't wait! |
| Amandine Daumier 2007-05-05 ch 23, | abuseI was going to send you a review pleading for more, but i went to your website and saw that there was 2 other books. So instead of pleading I'm going to compliment you on how well you write. I've been constantly reading your stories for a couple days now and i can't get enough. You are a fantastic writer that knows how to keep her readers entranced. I can't wait for more of anything you decide to write. :D |
| Raomina 2007-02-17 ch 23, | abuseOnce again, wonderful story. I love the adventures and characters. Very exciting, interesting and original. The 'Gods' remind me of RoTD, but I think the similarities end there. Please keep writing! If I remember correctly, there are still the Basilisk and Schatten tales which are not yet told. ;) |
| NOTPOSTING 2007-01-12 ch 23, | abuseis there going to be a third book?? When is it going to appear...please don't make me wait! |
| RoyallyScrewed 2007-01-06 ch 22, | abuseBOOK 3 BOOK 3 BOOK 3 *chants* you should SO get this published. Write another one, I command it! Epilogue was very sweet. ~AK~ |
| In Darkest Night 2006-12-26 ch 23, | abuseBeautiful story. Well thought out. Characters believable and endearing. A very nice addition to the Lost Gods series; and now I am quite irrevokably hooked. I admit that I was hesitant to read the sequal, recently having read the first book, and...I didn't quite know what to expect, but I am very happy I decided to read it, now! I especially loved Dym...for me, he remains one of the funniest characters, though his life definitly is NOT funny; parts with him making me smile. I like the highlanders. the whole turn-into-animals deal is VERY awsome. I'm definitly appreciating that the people of Pazhar are reborn; it's something that definitly makes them unique against all the other races that so far are fantastic. Now I am waiting with baited breath until we get to see the Basilisk Prince! and Piedre, which remains my favorite, even though I know nothing about it... |
| zuo 2006-11-16 ch 23, | abuseYour stories are so amazing, and addicting at the same time. The plot is just... so interesting. To tell you the truth, I'm probably going to start reading more fantasy-related slash fiction, because I just love your stories. I enjoy how the two books (so far) are intertwined with each other, yet the main characters from the first book only play cameos in the second. I also want to see fanart of your characters. Haha. I'm really looking forward to reading Book Three. And any other books after that. ^^. |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2006-11-08 ch 23, | abuseoh my goodness! i love this story! there are so cute!! NOW! up date NOW! PLEASE?! |
| BlueCarnation 2006-10-30 ch 23, anon. | abuseI really enjoyed this story, and the preceding one. I can't wait till the next begins and think the personalities are vivid and great! |