brilliance.

utter brilliance.

i dont know how you come up with these stories, but im dang near addicted to them. i finished books one and two today! i cant wait to read there; i only wish it were finished. oh well.

please continue with this series. if nothing else, this is definitely worthy of getting published. i would buy three copies myself - one to read, one to store, and one to show to friends.

i couldnt ask for a better story. ^_^

Really beautiful, even more so than the first part ( I guess my first impression was right ) and the ending was a real killer. I even shed a tear.
The storyline... characters are so catching I've spent my day in daydream daze that is sure to continue for a while... :)

"Pozhar would burn." You almost made me die from laughter :D

The story is really really good. I loved the Dragons, who wouldn't ? But this part about phoenix sounds intriguing as well.

Well, I liked this one better than the first part. This one was a little darker more angsty, but very good. I really loved the little side story. It was so sweet, but more importantly, it really helped the reader understand the history between the two better.

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YUSYUSYUS I loveth Raiden :D:D:D
Ohmehgawd excitment ^__^
Sorry I haven't reviewed lots of other chapters (I was being lazy)
You're my favourite author on this entire site though (fer cereal)

Fatty

This is incredibly sad D:
I'm sobbing right now.
I'm kind of consoled by the fact that he will be reborn though.
On to the next chapter.

Hmm I have a feeling that Shio and Shinju are mermaids.
Well written (:

I'm very excited to read this (:

Your stories are amazing. I don't understand why you don't have more reviews.

Great story, keep up the good work.

I am extremely pleased to have encountered your stories. They are very well written and I am looking forward to reading the rest of this series. I just realized how formal that sounded. Well... it gets the point across. I am enamored by the world you created more than the actual romance going on; also, for some reason, i love the name choices. Sometimes, at the scenes where people go soft and confess their undying love I get up from the computer squealing about how sappy love can be but keep grinning all the same. Your stories gave me a couple of those moments. What surprised me in the first story is how little reviews the story was given, not to mention this one. It deserves much more for being around so long and I hope more people recognize that.

I just have to review this although I usually don't bother... I don't have much to say, at least nothing that has been said already, I just want to express my deep love for this story and a shy wish that you write a lot more of this *-* Well, the other books that continue this story anyway. Thank you so much for this ♥

I like it how this story feels so much more "whole" than the previous one, somehow it left me with the feeling that there was so much you could still tell to deepen the story, I didn't get the feeling with this one. Maybe because there was already that story to back up this one but anyway. I love these both, I just hope you'll find the will to finish the third book as well as plausible fourth and fifth ^_^

nyaw!! That story was amazing!! I read the first one so I had to come and read this one too. You are an amazing writer! these stories are so incredibly well written that it feels like they are almost real histories of far away lands. I mean they are even better than the normal fairy tales we all know. All the characters are so in depth and there are no loose ends. I am such a sucker for a happy ending :) But you know whats funny? it took me like forever to realize the mermaids were the ones from the first story XP I like how you had subtle hints of how the stories are connected but also how this story could be read on its own.
Anyway, again, amazing story and I will keep my fingers crossed that maybe you might make another?? no pressure or anything...

This little sidestory is so sweet. I'm so glad you elaborated on it, instead of just having the condensed version from Dym in the story. Especially since it's from kid-Dym's POV. The reactions and language -- too cute, and heartbreaking at times. Lovely work.

As for the main story, I like how Dym manipulates everyone by giving them a false prophecy.

Now off to read the next Book!

~fd97

I love this series. The sidestory was very sweet and at the same time melancholic. This book was just as fun as the las one and like the last one, it was written very well. Not only that, but it didn't have much of a problem with scene and time shifting as the last one. I can't even remember when the shift was confusing. I can wait to read you next book and the rest of the story.