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| Holy Trin 2007-06-15 ch 1,  | abusevery cute. loved the ultra short shorts. Xx |
| Kailum 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseROFL That was hilarious! Chewing on a pencil eh? The pick-up lines were awesome. They were lame as hell xD Good job! |
| zephyrlight 2006-09-22 ch 1, | abuselol. This story was positively drawing!! I couldn't help continuing my way down the page--Koji is one desperate guy XDSo in the end it's Izumi who has the naughty thoughts? and all the while we're seeing Koji pop innuendo-ing questions at a supposedly blissfully-unaware Izumi. Talk about twists =PAny sequels?? Please say yes!! |
| rivalovery 2006-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHILARIOUS. XDD |
| fragmented blue 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this was cute. I really liked how Murakami tried to many different techniques, and in the end it was something totally unexpected and simple that won Kagoshima over. ^^ ink on paper |
| Sweetest-Smile 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseOmg, this is so cute!Write More! ^^ |
| Namida no Hurricane 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! It was funny ^_^ Personally I like a lot of conversation based stories... |
| Nub in Denial 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuse-chuckles-That was brilliant... Haha... chew on a pencil. I love the different stages of his attempts to be seductive. I also love the way you wrote it. It gives the story a certain flare that doesn't go overboard but simply keeps it to dialouge. Applause for you!-claps happily- |
| Abstruse Blue 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseThat was too~ cute!! I loved it! *falls over* |
| Bishop Tomb 2006-07-09 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting, I like it a lot, you must have really put some thought into this one. Good job. I wish I was good as you. No ones reviewing my stories. I’m a bad writer, but if you could review some of my work it would be a big confidence boost. Our maybe you could tell some people on the site about my work. ThanksBishop Tomb |