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| bla8 2008-03-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really really liked it, how it started Don't know if I would have said yes. . no i would have never said yes but thats me, shes;s just got guts Um just a grammer thing, though I'm not very good at it, when you start quotes so when you say "Go ahead," she said, "put. . . it's all right with your commas' but the second put should be capatilized. . . .in a way its like a new sentece .. .i guess. . .just a suggestsion, since people always tell me that .. . But i really relaly liked it(^^) |
| locks92 2008-03-27 ch 13,  | abuseLOL..OMG!! Please don't leave us hanging for too long. I can't take the pain. UPDATE!! No pressure though..lol. Um...okay Jett is cool. I really like his serious nature, Faylin is adorably funny, Aaron is somehow a hopeless romantic and Jacque is an **. So overall, great story!! Can't wait for the upcoming chappys. ~Maryann~ |
| darkgurl92 2008-03-25 ch 13, | abuseomg...jett better come quickly...n fay...omg...hopefully...they dont go beyond kissing...jux stop at the kissing...n slap jacque..fay...jett hurry up n find her...update soon.. |
| Estelin 2008-02-25 ch 13, | abuseThis another excellent story by you. keepe up the good work and writing. i can not wait to read more. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-02-25 ch 13, | abuseHello? Anyone home? Are you alive? Update soon please. you cannot leave us with a cliffhanger like that for too long! please UPDATE |
| synthetic-Love-hearts 2008-02-25 ch 13, | abuseHey! So i really really like this story! I read it in one sitting cause I couldn't stop reading it ( my parents were pretty mad when they came home from work and I was sitting at my computer, my eyes bloodshot! It was worth it though!) Please please puhleaze update soon! I'm dieing to find out what happens next :) |
| angelofdeceit 2008-02-18 ch 13, | abuseouch! thats gonna ** both Fay and Jett off!! what nationality is this guy? is he french?other than that, liking it so far! |
| funky-gg 2008-02-17 ch 1, | abusevery cool story! |
| yagiyniguez 2008-02-13 ch 13, | abuseplease update soon. i'm really excited!! :) |
| bubblie130 2008-02-02 ch 13, | abusethat story is really good ☺ update soon plz ☻ |
| sousie 2008-02-02 ch 13, | abuseupdate soon |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-28 ch 4, | abuseI'm so glad she has the will and courage to srike back agianst Jett. it is so cute how mad she can get with him. =] update soon |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-28 ch 3, | abuseI can;t believe that the begging actually worked. he doesnt seem like the type to give in to begging. |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-28 ch 2, | abusepoor Faylin. I'd start hyperventelating if my parents hadnt seen me in over 24 hours-they sure would be happy if I came back in one piece then they'd probably make me wish i had never come home because of how much i made them worry. please update soon |
| Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abusewhat an interesting way to find a wife. I would think that he would at least get the names of some witnesses before he darted out the door. great chapter |