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sophomoric genius 2006-07-10 . chapter 1
I couldn't seem to get enough of these philandering relationships. XP

I have to admit that at first I wasn't sure who was having the affair. It wasn't until Allan ordered Julia to get out of the car that I finally figured it out. I liked the way you started off with the rain, car and radio. Overall, it's a good one, though I still think perhaps you could've done better. =)
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