|Reviews for Kyoto Rainforest|
| this is britt 7/13/06 . chapter 1
and I'm going to favorite this. because you write so amazingly- honestly, I hate the prose on the website, but you have such a style that I love. you need to write some novels and get them published. by the way, you should listen to the song "Alone in Kyoto" by Air. I couldn't get it out of my head when I was reading this.
| heroin zombie 7/9/06 . chapter 1
You should care about your errors, and you should proof your work before exhibiting it. P
This was like a redundant scene in a stereotypical lame romance anime: CHERRY BLOSSOMS CHERRY BLOSSOMS A LITTLE GIRL RIDING THROUGH THE PARK ON A BICYCLE, PANTY SHOT, AWKWARD SITUATION, QUIET REFLECTION NEAR CHERRY BLOSSOMS _ complete with poor translations. I mean, seriously. "It was breezy in the city, blowing mroe (sic) cherry blossoms around, like a rain before the rain. It smelled like rain, and also like rain before the rain. You ask me how it could smell like rain with all the smog. I tell you that I'm psychich (sic), I read God's mind and he's the one that told me that it smelled like rain." Wow, just wow. I can see why while writing this you thought that was clever, but you just lack the language to properly communicate the comedy. This may or may not be due to not proofing it. Anyway, I assume you were high while your wrote this. I guess it's interesting, but mostly it's just unedited stoned writing. P
| Aquafied 7/9/06 . chapter 1
you and your good and so flowing
words, words, words.
| emeraude-irlandais 7/9/06 . chapter 1
Brilliant. There's something so unpredictably urbane about your words, the way you phrase them, the places you take them. Plus, it's completely believable, and that's what makes the one-shot/short story/poetry/whatever the hell it is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for providing a haven from the angst-beasts roaming around here. bella