oh its so good. yeah i think something with "Hope" is appropiate.

This was such a pretty story. I actually liked the way you wrote the dialouge, without quotations, but I noticed that towards the beginning the sentances ended with periods: "Hey. She said again. Tell me." While later on the ended with commas: "Of course not, she replied, otherwise we wouldn’t both be here.". As far as titles go, I think "Hope" would be rather appropriate, or at least something to do with hope. I'm not terribly good with titles myself, though, so maybe my advice had best be ignored. :)~Bitter Irony

Are you a Leo? Just wondering...

Great Story!! Makes me think... Sorry, don't have a title for ya.^_^Chet