Reviews for The Blonde Girl - FictionPress.com

C. Earnshaw 2007-01-08 ch 1,	I like the sequence of events/plot of this poem, especially the ending. I definitely wasn't expecting that, and it was rather refreshing to read such an ending after the more sexual imagery. Great job :)
Pretty Peaceful 2006-09-25 ch 1,	hey! wow you seem really mature and educated... i don't know why i get that impression but anyway! i've never really read any poems written like this... so descriptive and structured... it's very interesting, a taste of something new i guess. nonetheless i liked it! i'd really appreciate if you had a look at some of my work... i've recently undergone a new era in my life and am looking for some feedback! peace and love always from holly.
Daughter3 of Fabian Cortez 2006-07-26 ch 1,	Great work! This is a very interesting poem. The beginning was perfect: I sit as wisps’ of smoke Hue my countenance With bluish grey My breath abates To inhalations bliss And so was the ending: I lean in and Kiss my wife Gently on her tender Mouth whispering “I love you” Before settling to Sleep All in all I really liked this poem! Keep Writing!
simpleplan13 2006-07-24 ch 1,	beautiful
emzypops 2006-07-10 ch 1,	wow!
MistressEldyn 2006-07-09 ch 1,	Never ceased to amaze me. Thank you :)