Reviews for Walking on Cobwebs

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blackrose113 2007-01-24 ch 2,	abuseWow. This is a really creative story. I'm only familiar with the cave theory through my 9th grade 'Sophie's World' book, and I like this take on it. I wonder where Rianne is though. There are a few typos, but nothing glaringly obvious. (you're world is false...-->your world is false. stuff like that).
Enaid 2006-12-31 ch 2,	abusethe idea behind the story is really good and i like all of the details, but i hope the next chapter gives it more of a plot or storyline behind it. (i know that would be hard to establish in two chapter maybe even three but it would be nice)
grassland 2006-12-19 ch 1, anon.	abusehey, sorry for posting this here. COULD YOU PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE OF HUMANS AND OF FARIES. there. i'm done groveling and begging.:)
Right or Ryn 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseWhy are you not updating Across Time and Oceans? You need to do it!
Muffinsrule 2006-07-22 ch 2,	abuseDo you know I just figured out this was based on Plato's Cave after reading this chapter? Even though you pointed it out right in your summary? >_< It seems my brain takes awhile to make connections. Are you taking a course in philosophy? ~Toodles!~
swimchickslam 2006-07-22 ch 2,	abuseM... I really enjoy your writing style, but not much happened in this chapter :P
cynically amused 2006-07-18 ch 1,	abuseAn interesting premise; mysterious, yet interesting. Though it seems a little rushed from Rianne missing then to the point where she’s following him, but I’m sure it will work for the story. Then again, I would probably follow some mysterious guy if he had an accent…I am a sucker for unique accents. I also liked the part where you mention she’s out-of-shape, but won’t mention in it. As for being ‘shamelessly selfish’ for asking for reviews, don’t worry about it. Any writer wants to know that her stuff is liked. So anyways, I think that you should continue-whenever you can-with this.
Ava E. Lin 2006-07-14 ch 1,	abuseplease tell me you're going to finish this! it's interesting!
Michelle Habibi 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abusecol! this is interesting...update soon or at least someday...ill be waiting! and im sure a lot of other readers would be too! -Michelle Habibi P.S. why arent u updating for any of your other stories? ive been waiting eons for your next chapter for most of your stories! please update again!! im begging you!!
anamika 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseshe writes! hallejiuah update american duchess will ya it was entertaining till you gave up on it. this was how to say...interesting kinda miami werebat-ish...uh if that makes sense just ur style of writing um i think, sorry highly confused child reviewing here anyways update something soon!
the littlest sakura 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseWell this story is different than your other one-shots. A lot more evasive, still i am intrigued. '“Do you ever feel like what you're looking at isn't real, and that if you keep trying, you'll be able to see right through it?”' this line seemed kinda sudden... u did build up to it a bit with Rianne's previous line, but this seems to pretty much dump us in the middle of the intrigue..which is one way to get into something i suppose =P 'While she might enjoy nature as much as the next person, she did not reveal in it.' should have been revel, not reveal. heh. And if you're stuck in boredom land, you could always read/critique one of my stories. hopeful I've only posted two one-shots,and they're quite short so it wouldn't take you too long. And I would love to get the opinion/critique of an author like you, whom I've read(and reread) and respected for so long. please?
swimchickslam 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abusehey what happened to rianne? but i like it.. mystical!
Arialla 2006-07-10 ch 1,	abuseI love it, as usual =). Yay for (good) new stories! ~ Aria P.S. GO WRITE OHAF! P.P.S. TELL MON TO UPDATE!
square root 2006-07-09 ch 1,	abuseOh, wow. I like this, a lot. Is it just a one-shot, or (hopefully) there'll be more?
Aviendha 2006-07-09 ch 1,	abuseGreat job! I love it! I want to know what happens next!

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