every bit as wonderful as the first ch.

i dont know what to say 0_0 i ** love this! its just so poetic & gorgeous & you've written it absolutely *perfectly*

very interesting. I love the almost poetic feel to the first chapter, and the descriptions in the second. I can't wait for more!

I wanted to let you know that I am rewriting The White Rose, and will be removing it from Fiction Press to repost the prologue and first chapter. (which should be posted by today.) I'm just letting everyone who reviewed the story know that it will be removed and reposted. Thanks for your reviews!

Maranwe Telrunya

You're back!

Hail the long-dead one. :D

Just kidding.

"The dreams ran backwards." Beautiful. I have these sorts of fragments of thoughts occasionally, the ones that stick in your mind and you think about for ages...

Really lovely - I'm intrigued. Is this a prologue for a story?

Whatever you're going to write, keep writing! I miss your stories!!

:D

Ah! I LOVE IT.

You write so good. =]

♥BangBang