Hey, I realy liked this story. It was amazing. Very cute and sweet and I lvoe how it all tied together.

Love,
Becca

:D great story! I love the whole identity issue thing!
-- Christina

Oh my GOSH. This is an absolutely fantastic work on this site. So great! I love the originality and the sophistication of your writing. Though short, you were able to make it enrapture the readers. A definite stand-out in FP. I love it!

I am Catholic and I do love God, but I'm not bothered at all. People have to be open-minded no matter the topic when it comes to intellectual properties because it is in the freedom of the author to write about anything that comes to his mind.

this story is funny :D i like it

l am so serious when l say this would make a great movie. lt could use a little more scenes. and maybe a prequel part. showing them in heaven falling in love and the battle. lt would be a great movie, and l know it will most likely never happen, but l can't wait to see it!

Next time you wish to write something biblically based research better. Remember, the bible is one of the most influential peces of literature ever to have graced this earth. So many great authors have cited, alluded, and made reference to it. The least you could do is get the stories right. And don't think i reprimand with the feeling of my faith being slighted (far from it). I just don't like a good work being spoiled.

Nice. Very, very nice. I absolutely love the ending. Keep up the good writing. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

this story sounds great! i was a little iffy reading it because im ignorant about the bible and sort of like to keep it that way but its really going good here!

Interesting story! I loved it. :) G'job, hon'.

lurved it.

Awe, I thought this was really cute and pretty original. I loved how God had personality and wasnt just this blob, and how Ria was an artist...in the way that she helped create the world. Fate had a personality that was spunky too. And even Satan/Luc took on a completely different edge. Great job!

=D i love it, fight scene wasnt half bad, wasnt all that great, but it shouldnt have been violent, it was just right for them

Heheh, love it! A little sacriligeous, but hey, I enjoyed it! God as a "skater dude" was also highly amusing... The only thing that i would pick on is the easy reconcilitation... no way would Satan change back to Lucifer that quickly- I mean, he's had millenia to build up the personality, and suddenly he has an instant reversion? Assuming that Celestial psychology resembles the human stuff, there's a little I don't think so about the whole situation.
Even so, I enjoyed "Fate" and I thought the ending was fairly good, considering... IN other words, nice job!
Erisah

wow. it ended. short story, but it got where it was supposed to be. my only peeve is that.. god spoke like a kid. but hahaha i guess he's dressed like akid, so yeah.

"He was the Prince of Darkness, The Fallen One, the being that even God had trouble contending with." the pride in him.. is obvious.

good description of the angels in their real form. (: