A very purifying (if that's even a word..) poem, well done! Salvation has always been here.

Nice poem. I couldn't find anything wrong with it so good work!

I know the feeling and I know the moment. Lovely words for the ultimate meaning of life. Your sentences are very "matter of fact"ly written; sometimes that adds a good effect, but other times it makes it sound choppy and a bit too obvious. Just something to think about. Anyway, well done.

Nicely done.

Refreshing and wonderful!

This is very nice. I liked your use of parallelism in the beginning of the poem. The images in this piece are nice, too. However, I think you should move this poem from the ‘general’ section to the ‘religion’ section. If you put your work in the most specific category possible, you’re likely to get more reviews, and I think this piece deserves them. Keep up the good work!

A wonderful spiritual poem! I'm surprised you only put this as general, personally I think it would go better under the "Spiritual" category. But still, it's good. It was well-written, with lots of colour and meaning to the words. Good job.

That was really good. So full of hope. I also like the way you worded it. Good Job!