Wow. Thats some vivid descriptions you've got going on there. I like it alot! Keep up the good work, :)

Thank you for the review!! I love this poem! I watched the game and I was rooting for Italy! You really captured the game in a great aspect, you know. Well keep writing!! Thanks again!

Nice poem. Not my style really (I'm more of a dark sort of person *laughs*), but it was well written and I liked it. It sort of reminded me of my poem, "One Word", totally different subject, but it's written the same way.Thanks for reviewing my poem!~Rowan~

Powerful and emotional.

EXCELLENT! I love your extended metaphor of the dragon and the knights. Great work.

_R&R my novel EARTHSTONES, please!

Nice work, really. I loved how you made the World Cup into suspenseful metaphor. I love soccer, but I was not able to watch it because it was on cable or satellite, and my parents believe in neither. But I think your interpretation of the game was much more amusing! Great job!

-Brittney

P.S. Thanks a million for the review; it meant a lot. Best wishes to you and your writing!

Wow! I have really crappy television, so for weeks I've been wondering who won the FIFA cup, but keep forgetting to look on the internet, but you've given me the answer anyways. This is great. I wish I could have seen the game you make it sound phenomenal and more than exciting. I have only one critique. In the line "tossing power at their heals." It should be "heels," not "heals." Okay? Great work!

~Cirien Phoenix

P.S. Thanks very much for the review on "I Walk Under The Moon." I'm glad you liked it. If you type the words, "Nightwalker: Midnight Detective Soundtrack" into google, the first site to come up has the soundtrack for people to listen to. The first song is the one that inspired me. Also, I've been to Canada and it's a great country. Toronto is exciting, but the Canadian country is gorgeous as well!

Forza Italia! Ah, the World Cup was the biggest excitement to me because my beloved azure team pulled through. This was a good... what's the word? Ode? Not ode, but something similar, but I can't think of the word. I also liked the repitition of "one." It really pulled the piece together. Nice work!

it's funny how ppl still think that france won...maybe not beat italy but did their best? anyway, loving the knight metaphor. reminds me of chess. nice work.

Funkadelic, my football friend! I like how you mentioned the headbutt. That was on the news a lot...

Anywho, I love it! You make it sound more interesting than it was, I think. Maybe.

Nice work. I like the metaphor of knights and monsters. It put an interesting and creative spin on what might have otherwise been a dull subject. Keep up the good work!