OMFG. This is better than amazing. Wow. The imagery is inspiring. Really. You did an AMAZING job. Thanks for the review. Loved it.

Reminds me of... certain individuals I once knew, heh.

Nice usage of metaphors and such.

Favorite line: "There's an expensive and shortening supply of happiness and gasoline".

I think this is excellent. Every single line was beautiful and chilling in its own way. I especially liked the phrase, “dreams can quickly turn against you” for its terrible truth. Keep up the amazing work! I’m adding this to my favorite stories list.