Reviews for Desperately Wanting

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tomato-soup-in-my-coffee 2007-07-17 ch 18,	abuse100. That's my rating, and I'm sticking to it. I loved the whole damn thing, even though it was so short. And damnit, I want more. Amazing job. Really was.
Estelin 2007-03-22 ch 18,	abusei rank this #10. i loved this story imensely. keep up the good work.
M.R.Sanner 2007-01-16 ch 18,	abuseOh please write a sequeal ! These awesume characters deserve a sequeal ! But I can't make yah write anything , only just beg ::cries:: . This story was a 10 I realyl enjoyed it and has became one of my fav. peices of Fp !
Catfreak 2006-10-29 ch 18, anon.	abusethis is a 10. definitely a 10. ^^ please write more...big kitty cat eyes
Catfreak 2006-10-28 ch 10, anon.	abusei LOVE the beginning of this chapter!! i was cracking up while reading it. nice job!! ^_^
Rayne Logan 2006-10-25 ch 18,	abuseI just finished reading your story, and I absolutely adore it! I caught a few typos here and there, but there was nothing that drew my attention from the story. I'd LOVE for you to write a sequel. I don't like stories that keep me questioning, wondering what the future has entailed, but I'm not sure how you feel about that. You're doing NaNoWriMo this year? I'm hoping to try it... but I'm really not sure if I'll be able to... with school and stuff, it'll be a hell of a lot of work. I'd love to be able to write something like this though! Some things could have been explained a little more to your readers, like the politics side of things. We only got tidbits about the leader... and about the government, and only a bit more on Prophecies. The plot overall was great though, and this was a brilliant read.
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 6,	abuse::bluck:: I agree with Fletcherabout soap opreas . I don't see how anyone can watch them , no wait , there are some really hot guys on them . Ah so thats why people watch them 1 For the hot guys !
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 5,	abuselmao , hilarious ! Omg , I was laughing so hard ^ ^ . One time my cousins and I bought some condoms put lotion in them and stuck them on peoples cars ! Lol , that was fun !
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 4,	abusewoot!Peanut butter ! I like pb&j sandwhiches , they are very yummy to my tummy ^ ^. Hmm ,I wonder what lies aahead of them for the super market ??
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 3,	abuse::sighs:: this is a really great story ! Oh and I luv that song ! Hahha , it took me a while to catch on to hte meaning . My brother ahd to explain to me about the milarty alphabet thingie .Lol , gorsh Im so slow .Lol
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 2,	abuse::squeal:: Im in total love with this story ! Aww ,why do you ahve to make it so short ! ::cries:: it's so good !
M.R.Sanner 2006-09-23 ch 1,	abuseOMG OMG OMG , this is so good ! Seriously ,this is really good ! I love it ::favs:: , I can't wait to finish this review and go read the next aprt ! Please R&R my story Frogs ,Wart & Kisses . ( it is a reamke of the frog prince with my own little twist )
Leeona Trance 2006-09-23 ch 18,	abuseThat was definitely a whole bunch of tens. :)A nice, calm ending. Loved it. ~Leeona Trance
Leeona Trance 2006-09-23 ch 17,	abusexD I can't wait to see what Miranda will do after finding him.
Leeona Trance 2006-09-23 ch 16,	abuseThat's neat... help for prophecies. You're evil to your characters. xP ~Leeona Trance

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