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| squeaky314 2006-07-20 ch 1,  | abuseI like the rhyming, and I like how each line alternates between a different point of view. IMO boys=evil but that's just me. |
| Windup Hopping Lederhosen 2006-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI love/miss you! tee hee. I'll throw you a rave at the dojo. . . tomorrow! Loving you tons! |
| Tender Sugar 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to the pains you feel, very well written. Very good piece here. -ts |
| awannabewriter 2006-07-10 ch 1, | abuseVery thought provoking poem you got here. Sometimes... |