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Sunsetshadow19 2008-09-06 ch 10,	abuseHilarious story! Lorenzo was a bit of a surprise. It's funny that Adam is gorgeous but has no idea and hasn't made the popular group. I love the fact that he's completely clueless...I look forward to seeing what happens
BloodstainedSunday'sBest 2008-08-31 ch 10,	abuse:] i really like this its good and different
cloudwatcher 2008-08-27 ch 10,	abuseGod's I love it. You have this circle of agressive men slowly closing around poor oblivous Adam. Halarious!
Adam Lawless 2008-08-20 ch 10, anon.	abuseOkay, So I just realized that this is more than just ONE chapter. While I'm at work right now... I plan on reading the entire thing. I'm VERY interested. I've caught bits a pieces of the store as I thumbed (or clicked) through the pages... oddly enough, more similarities to my life. Hm... are you watching me? haha ...Adam
Adam Lawless 2008-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey, I just got done reading your story. I found it while "googling" my name online. ha ha ha. It's great to hear a story is being written about me. Oddly enough, I'm Adam Lawless and for the longest time my best friend's last name was Smith. It actually a little to close for comfort! :) Please let me know if you write more! I'd love to find out what happens to me!
Balliett 2008-08-13 ch 10,	abuseThis story is very praise-worthy. Well-written, interesting plot, and totally humorous. Your writing style is simplistic, and flows without hitch. And I simply adore the voice of the moronically-oblivious, socially retarded, amusing Adam. At least I'm not some crazy, "secret" fangirl/fanboy like all the rest of his admirers. ;) I almost fell out of my chair laughing during two parts of this story. Once during Adam and Tristan's joke/insult marathon and once during this part, which remains my favorite funny moment: '(“Young man, what the hell do you think you are doing, molesting those animals? And in public, on the street, too! Put the poor chick down and step away from the animals!” “But, sir, I’m not even touching the—” “My god! Are you performing beasity now? How horrid! You wicked, wicked child!”)' Only one way to describe that: TEH LOLOLOLOL. xD Tristan is awesome with his once emo haircut and eyebrow piercings and Wii and bishounen-ness. Lorenzo is a dick. Brant is...well, Brant. And Eliza is like a slighly crazier version of my best friend. Your characters are superb. =D Anyway, I'm rambling. What I read so far was great. Keep up the good work. ^^
meri 2008-07-17 ch 10, anon.	abusemore!!?
blackoblivion13 2008-07-04 ch 10,	abuseThat was wicked awesome!! >.< Poor Adam though! Thinks he's not cute!!
Ariel Cheng 2008-07-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love this story! I found it about a week ago, and I finished reading the whole thing within an hour. Believe it or not, I've read the whole thing more than five times. I love your story that much! Hopefully your story is not on hiatus!
Jaded Devil 2008-06-29 ch 10,	abuseOh my, I love your story to bits! Everything is so natural and plausible, and it's always cool to have a character who's innocent and oblivious. I hope to read more soon!
narcissistic 2008-06-12 ch 10,	abuseohh hot for teacher...or hot for student. poor little Adam. he gets molested and now he has a teacher after him...you know i cant really find one pairing i like in this cause they all just go with adam...this must be hard for you to make him end up with one person...cause we cant have him being alone now can we?
narcissistic 2008-06-12 ch 9,	abuseLawless you are clueless. therefore you deserve a sucker punch to the face. hahaha
narcissistic 2008-06-12 ch 8,	abusei love how the teacher commented on how disgusted he looked. and is that song seriously in greese? what a wierd perverted song!! what were they thinking?!
narcissistic 2008-06-12 ch 7,	abusehaha i love how he is so clueless to his hotness.
narcissistic 2008-06-12 ch 6,	abusehaha white people shuldnt try to act black...it messes up the natural order.

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