"Holy Graden snake"
that's nice, like a different way of saying it.

How is /everything/ you write so goreous?

It's amazing. really.

How do you do it?? I'm honestly in love with your work.

i adore the last 3 lines. "Holy Garden snake" has such a ring to it.

You never cease to amaze me. I loved it bunches, you have a wonderful way with words.

I love this. It's visual and bitter and simply beautiful.

painful, inteersting too with that last image, lovely job

Just love the conclusion.

Not much to say on this one, a bit short I guess but I suppose it fits with the whole "oneword: belonging" thing. We both know you can do better, but as always... this was a enjoyable read. See you on your next update, noelle-san. - ADD-san

Wow, your poetry is so amazing. *Jealous* I love the format, the words, everything, nicely done.

powerful and beautifully written

nice.. absolutely loved it!

she said to me:"can i say 'i love you' enough?"

i replied:"you just can't"and"this isn't belonging"

because that deserved an encore, period. beautiful. suffocating, intoxicating.

always&forever,

°Gyn

ha. love.

Wow, something that short and blunt could not have been so good! Nice work.

Uh! I don't know what to say, except for that you confused me! Anyways it is good! Keep it up!Sythiro