|Reviews for belonging|
| stained blue 6/8/08 . chapter 1
"Holy Graden snake"
that's nice, like a different way of saying it.
| Chaos Apple 8/31/06 . chapter 1
How is /everything/ you write so goreous?
It's amazing. really.
How do you do it? I'm honestly in love with your work.
| lackluster 8/30/06 . chapter 1
i adore the last 3 lines. "Holy Garden snake" has such a ring to it.
| twistedtruths 8/19/06 . chapter 1
You never cease to amaze me. I loved it bunches, you have a wonderful way with words.
| dirty windows 8/14/06 . chapter 1
I love this. It's visual and bitter and simply beautiful.
| not sure yet 8/10/06 . chapter 1
painful, inteersting too with that last image, lovely job
| eldrin 8/1/06 . chapter 1
Just love the conclusion.
| arcane devices 8/1/06 . chapter 1
Not much to say on this one, a bit short I guess but I suppose it fits with the whole "oneword: belonging" thing. We both know you can do better, but as always... this was a enjoyable read. See you on your next update, noelle-san. - ADD-san
| HauntedMisery 7/27/06 . chapter 1
Wow, your poetry is so amazing. *Jealous* I love the format, the words, everything, nicely done.
| simpleplan13 7/24/06 . chapter 1
powerful and beautifully written
| castelgard 7/23/06 . chapter 1
nice.. absolutely loved it!
| finger on the trigger 7/20/06 . chapter 1
she said to me:"can i say 'i love you' enough?"
i replied:"you just can't"and"this isn't belonging"
because that deserved an encore, period. beautiful. suffocating, intoxicating.
| account not in use 7/20/06 . chapter 1
| White is a Sin 7/19/06 . chapter 1
Wow, something that short and blunt could not have been so good! Nice work.
| Sythiro 7/19/06 . chapter 1
Uh! I don't know what to say, except for that you confused me! Anyways it is good! Keep it up!Sythiro