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| Tinsley 2006-08-22 ch 1, | abuseHey chick (or dude), this is awesome so far! I look forward to reading more! Read mine! Love y’all, Tinsley! |
| cloudXnine 2006-08-16 ch 9, | abuseDanny it was good, uh yeah I figured out how to find the website... haha, sorry bout that, I just saw how to now... uhm ops? but yeah sorry bout that, you had a different website on your website thingy before... I just didn't really realize that you changed it till now so yeah sorry. |
| cloudXnine 2006-08-12 ch 8, | abuseHey Danny it's me Becca, I just wanted to say that it was great. Oh and the link on your page for the website doesn't work... just so ya know. |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-12 ch 8, | abuseI didn't see any typos in this chapter... But I did see some before.I just don't remember now. Maybe I'll go back and look. Oh well... Super meanie.Well, I'm going to go watch this movie with my sisters so, seeya later.Well, now I've changed my mind. Did you do the follow up to Cross my Heart and Hope you Die?I got an email alert for you, and now I'm going to go and look.Later,Nicole |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-12 ch 7, | abuseGood deal... I'm glad things are starting to come together with that stupid situation.Cause honestly, I hope they do something really super evil to her. Maybe, if it didn't happen, could you just... just... I don't know... kick her down a set of bleachers or something?hehehe... don't ask about my sorta weird suggestions.lolNicole |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-12 ch 6, | abuseHi there,you have another chapter, but of course, I'm not quite caught up yet.I intend to be by tonight. anyway, that was a cute chapter for the most part.But, can we sorta pin allie to a flat surface with a few knives or something? She's evil. Nasty little **.Or, maybe we can lock her in a room and make her watch barney for 24 ours. that'd drive anyone crazy.lolAnyways, later,Nicole.On to the next chapter. I thought you had more reviews? Last time I looked, I thought you had like eight.Oh well, I'll review the next chapter too. |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-06 ch 5, | abuseWow. Maybe I should read some more but, can we have some more history on Saxon?this seems interesting. Hold on a sec... What was the name of the guy in your other story? oh ok... Never mind, I remember now.I just remember hearing that name before. so, from what we know so far, he was abusive... Interesting. So why is he back now? that super sucks. How the hell did he find her at the freeking hospital?well, going on to read the next chapter,Nicole |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-02 ch 3, | abuseOh ok. I thought the story was about her. About Danny. Anyways, this is crazy. Was wondering how she was herself.don't have much to say about this chapter cause I don't know what to say. want to see if Johny's ok. So, I'm going to turn my screen reader back on, and keep reading! Bye |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-02 ch 2, | abuseI promise to review all the chapters, until I'm caught up. That does seem sorta weird. How she would just up and strike up a conversation with her out of no where. It's wierd, just knowing who she is. It sounds like something I'd do. Strike up a conversation with someone just for the hell of it. But on someone like that meanie, it's a little strange.Anyways, later,Nicole |
| cluttered soul101 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseWow... this looks interesting. I just started reading it, hense me only reviewing chapter 1. But really, I think this will be cool to see how all of these crazy people interact with each other. you'll be stretching my brain. lol I'm going to school for psychology, I'm coming to get you all! lol Just kidding.Later,Nicole |
| tears of emerald 2006-08-01 ch 7, | abuseIt's very funny and sad. I like this story. I especially like Johnny, and how he seems to have wandered of the path of reality a bit... maybe Danny can put him back on the right track... |