o, i liked this alot. Imagery was really good. This is a great metaphor. good job, keep writting

This is an excelent piece of freestyle poetry. I loved it keep up the good

awesome! I really liked because I know whats it like to paint! I'm guessing you do too. Nice work! Keep it up!

**Jasper**

This is very nice. I liked the way you began and ended with the same two lines. It really brought the message of this poem into full circle. I enjoyed the imagery in this piece as well. Keep up the good work!