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| wordsworth in a garbage can 2006-08-01 ch 1,  | abuseif I had room in my favorites- I'd favorite this in a heartbeat. beautiful. |
| Lucca Ashtear 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseVery nice, dude! I can't think of anything wrong with this. Keep writing! ^_^ |
| sylvia's syndrome 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed reading this. I liked the bit where you compared your hands to explorers. You did a very good job at capturing and expressing feelings of longing and homesickness in this piece. Keep up the good work! |
| crazy dog events 2006-07-11 ch 1, | abuseAw, I went through a bout of of homesickness today, so this was nice to read. (Ironically, I wrote something on the subject myself, but decided against posting it.) The last few lines felt a bit redundant, and my head is still trying to reconcile 'metropolises' being the plural form of 'metropolis' (it sounds somehow off) but for the most part I really liked it. |