the creative format added a lot to the poem's power...nice poem!

what the hell... i can't tell if that was f-ing good or not... my friend... 7-7-06... f-ing piece of... no not your piece... i can't tell... crap... um sorry I dunno... : ...

truthful. Raw. Nice.

Cool. I like the writting style you put for this poem. Oh and I have a question how were you able to get this up because I've been trying all day and mine won't upload.