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| Noir Fleurir 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abusethis haiku is interesting but you are off one syllable at the end! |
| Sneer 2006-08-23 ch 1, | abuseSimple but true, I likes a lot! Really, I saw this thing yesterday but I didn't save it and I just spent like 10 min I think looking for this thing! Dear God the wabes of pure EMO I had to wade through to find this thing!But I did! So HA! Take that!No I don't know who I'm talking (writting?) to! Does it matter? NO!Bye and good luck! oh...and just because I can... w00t! |
| Basara 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abusewow...yep it's true in writing poetry in paper...also true with people...once its there,it'll be a memory for it... nice... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of staining white sheets with lasting pen marks. That presents a piercing image. Then the tone of finality. Nice. |
| hateandkill-D 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseCool. |