   Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-12 . chapter 1Interesting, I like the tone of emptiness. |
 hateandkill-D 2006-07-12 . chapter 1Cool. |
 Butterfly Disguise 2006-07-11 . chapter 1Woh my new favorite haiku! I love it when people know the right words to say to make 3 little lines say a whole lot. Real nice job! ;) |
 Moondog Dozier 2006-07-11 . chapter 1A mellow truth in this. Well written haiku. |
 Helena Evangelist 2006-07-11 . chapter 1You know, usually I don't like poems that are really short but I liked this one for some reason. It was simple and made sense but it also left some things for the reader to think about and try to fill in themselves. Good work. |
 Honor Bound 2006-07-11 . chapter 1nice focus. good job |
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