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Reviews For: Midnight Dream

E.S. Lundgren
2006-07-12
ch 1,
beautifully written, and great iamgery.
sylvia's syndrome
2006-07-11
ch 1,
This is nice. I like the images and dreamlike diction in this piece. My favorite lines were, “and the sand grows flowers/ in the palm of your hand.” This poem mades me think of Peter Pan and Neverland. Good work, overall. I only wish it had been a bit longer. Keep up the good work!

Just as a note… I think you’re confused about what ‘disclaimer’ means. You would use one if you did NOT own what was on the page, not if you do own it. Think about the word: dis – claimer… as in, ‘not claiming.’ Anyway, fictionpress puts a copyright at the bottom of the page for you. You telling people not to steal your work twice won’t necessarily make them think twice.
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