Aww... Matt's so sweet, but lieing to her wasn't a smart thing... Even though he did it for her. it's so sad. I love it. BTW, the pics you drew (the ones in your bio) are really good. I wish i could draw like you... =D

i like your story is kind of sad at the end of the story. this kind of romance story is wat i called sad story.hah wellkeep it up wish to see more stories from u.

WEE~! Great story =D I really liked it since it enlighten my sad mood, sighs problems are evil. But anyways thanks for reviewing my work too ^^

This is really sad! TRYING NOT TO CRY!

aww... that was really sad... poor people... --tear-- write more short stories. THEY'RE GOD. lol yay! anyway... thank you for the review!!^^ i dk if the chapters will be much long than the prologue... cause the prologue has two parts. so yea. long then that. I doubt it. um... Maybe a little longer than one half. ahahaha. anyway. THANKS AGAIN. WRITE MORE SHORT STORIES IF YOU CAN. AND YOU'RE A SENIOR. YOU SMART CHILD YOU. >< byeeali

aww.. thats so sad.. :( it made me sad.. it was really good.~noelle

In response to your question: Cause I do, too! This was good! I'm trying to hold back tears...

Anyways, good job!

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Yeah. I wonder why, too.

Your style of writing caught my attention. I've seen a few try this, but yours seem to have a sense of... flawlessness(?) in it.

Still, it was a good read. Hope you make a story that isn't so short.