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Reviews For: The Apple's Sin
Vivix 2006-07-12 . chapter 1
"The apple is a majestic orb of rich and deep flavor, red as blood, and yet also as red as a rose. The colors of the apple are brushstrokes of fresh spring and scarlet blossoms, blooming in vanilla-white and sun-thirsty flowers. The wintergreen sail perched upon its bow captures the scent of mint and forest, refreshing to the senses. Light green spreads into a bright yellow, which then expands into the surest red ever seen, it is vivid and deep, full of profound meaning. This irregular sphere flushes with crimson, but within, it is a globe of burning amber dripping with tangy syrup. Reflecting the sun’s hot, furious glare, the smooth skin seems glazed like ice, but a bite beneath the glossy surface pours out juice as sweet as love. This luscious bite is soft like leather and rich as a mound of melted gold and sugar delicately savored by the tongue, and the warm, scented honey and rose petals caress the tender taste buds."
Anya Tempest 2006-07-12 . chapter 1
The Bible never called it an Apple. It only said "fruit". In my RMPS exam we were told that if we called it an apple we would fail.

However, I did like the imagery and description, very nice indeed.
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