There's a good balance between dialogue and description, also there isn't too much background info, so it doesn't get boring.

Good ending to the chap too! Cliffy eh XD

Ok so I'm too lazy to log in or use my full penname here so I'll be me today. Awesome chapters! I loved all 3 of them. Great job! Keep up the awesome fic so I can see what else happens!

Also I love Black Rose's name ^_^

~Saku~

Oh awesome chapter! I love it so much. Great job so far and I can't wait to see whatcha do next! Update soon

~Saku~

Oh awesome story so far! It's so suspenseful. Wow. I really loved it so far and this chapter leaves me wondering what is gonna happen next! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

~Saku~

Who's the figure in the tree? What kinda power does Katashi have? Whar's with the guy ordering Yoshi to bring Katashi to him? I have to know so PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE SOON!