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| ChrisCHJ 2008-03-07 ch 27, | abuseLOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH You is awesome :3 |
| icey 2007-11-04 ch 27, anon. | abuseOMG! you're story is so awesome, though i am a bit confused by the last chapter... anyway you are an incredibly talented writer! please never stop writing! Your dialouges, wait, everything, was so well written you could probably go professional! |
| Agape.Philios.Eros 2007-10-22 ch 27, | abuseIs this the ending? 'Cause I don't get it. This was a really god story... but no offense, this ending is just silly and confusing... What is going on?! |
| DBZ-FAN-JESS 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseI want to tell you how much I loved this story and it's sequel. I love these two characters, it was great ^_^ |
| enternally-dark90 2007-08-24 ch 27, | abuseThis story was cool. A lot of things going on but it was addictive. I hate that Adrien got raped. That part made me cry. On to the sequel for me. |
| diebyownhands 2007-04-14 ch 1, | abuseI think you've got a great start here. I'm surely hooked on it and will continue reading until my eyelids close hehe, It's late. The author note mentioned you had fix most POV mistakes, now I usually don't do this and I'm sorry if it bothers you and please don't take it the wrong way but here are some mistakes "Adrien,” He smiled, getting some of my regular self back in there" (Also I love the whole Crazy Adrien and normal Adrien) uglier that a swamp and had half the manners of a dog (I think you've got a typo here that/than?- also I like the expression I never heard it before hehe. The mom/son relationship seems really nice too) head again telling me to either seem anxious and call Adrien right then, (telling him) his mother since he never won, and probably never wouldn’t, ( probably never would?) I'm off to read the next chp. |
| Midnights Scream 2007-01-30 ch 2, | abuseI feel like I've read this story before, but I'm not sure. Hm |
| Midnights Scream 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseheheh. go Sam. |
| Kristina Malfoy 2007-01-16 ch 27, | abuseI was really engaged in this story until the epilogue. You were going really strong with a nice, engaging romance then BAM you have the April Fools thing happen without much of of a finish in the epilogue. I guess the sequel is going to finish off the story really? I was just a little disappointed at the extremely abrupt ending to your otherwise extremely well written fic. |
| dolly-dear 2007-01-07 ch 27, | abuseAw, what a sad ending. I can honestly say I throughly enjoyed this. Cute. Very Cute. |
| greendayfan07 2007-01-04 ch 27, | abuseOMG!! im sorry i havent reviewed before. But this is an absoulutly amazing story. I really hope you continue to right a sequel. I really want to know what might happen. |
| axkillerxenigma 2007-01-03 ch 27, | abusehm...i don't really get the last part...but the rest of the story was fantastic! And i see theres a sequel! I'm gonna go read it now! Great job writing it and keep up the great work! |
| DannyDangerous 2006-12-28 ch 27, | abuseO_O Ohmigod...Wow didn't see the ending coming. Nope totaly shocked and alomost cried. Yup. I was looking for a happy ending..but you..with that genius mind of your came and gave me something I never thought I'd see for an ending. Will there be a sequal? PM me and tell me please. -Danny D- |
| Alenor 2006-12-27 ch 27, | abuseNO WAY!! poor adrien! i feel so sad now. i really really really hope there's a sequel because i need to know that adrien ends up being ok. cya later ~ Alenor. |
| Willow Fern 2006-12-25 ch 27, | abuse..Epilogue? As in..done? No more? I hope not... -Willow |