He sounds hot! I love the simplicity of it. Short and to the point... well, vaguely, haha.

I like this poem, firstly and quite simply, for it's extremely intruiging plotline. The boy is always rigid. It evokes questions. Why IS he like that? What's so off about him? What's his... problem?

I also liked, once again, the use of formatting, which made the poem evermore interesting.

- Clap Trap, from Review Marathon (link in my profile)

i'd like to know about the question that he is asking it. sounds like a cold lover whom someone is addicted to?

Wow, this is just amazing. You have managed to leave me speechless and with tears in my eyes. There is so much feeling in your words and honesty and lost innocence. I like this a lot.

Okay, so I've already read all of your poetry, but I feel the need to comment this one.

Because, I can relate to it so well. It really really hits home.

And I love it. It's simplicity and depth make it incredible.

Love it.

“is he always like that?”

Yes. God, yes. The number of times I've been asked that... and he IS always like that. Because if he wasn't, you wouldn't waste so much time trying to love him, trying to warm him up. Doesn't work, does it? Just makes you colder.

"you can’t remember him any other way"

This is so lovely, so... delicate, almost. Like touching it would smudge it. But it's also got the rigidity and it's strong and just so intense... intense, yeah, that's the best word for it.

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It could be about a snowman...

or a lover on drugs...

or a lover... who's cold and doesn't love you back...

or...

I like it.

this poem is simple.

simple & good, filled with meaning.

awesome!

man its questions like that that always ** me off. but the ending is so true. and i,like the other reviewer am also an insomniac which probably explains why im reading poems so late at night. well anyway great job on the poem.

ha. I'd say lol but that usually ** off people. I laughed out loud. There.

I loved the humour in this poem. Usually they're all "everything sucks, ok??"

Please disregard this review, i'm an insomniac teenager.

This is profound. This made me feel awkward and uncomfortable – but not in a bad way. You managed to create such powerful feelings in this poem that they leapt right up off the page. Keep up the good work!