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| Rain Gray 2006-07-12 ch 1,  | abuseMount Kahlua? Did you do that on purpose? It's funny either way. This is cute and a dragon named Kyle, I like that. |
| EvilUnderdog 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is a good story, and I love the idea for the game! I'll try to play it with someone... but none of my brothers or sisters like writing. x3 Anyway, thatnks for sharing the game. |
| AutumnRain16 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseI think this is pretty funny. its cute. i think i like it better without a real ending. it has an implied happy ending. it doesn't need anything more. the rum thing at the end is really cute. Your writing game sounds really fun. I'd like to try something like that sometime...anyways i liked the story. |