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| wishing/dreaming/waiting 2006-10-12 ch 1, | abuseVery dramatic. Not too much description, but just enough imagery to make me shudder. And shiver. I shuddered and shivered. Good job. |
| lady-in-the-mirror 2006-08-29 ch 1, | abuse"It was one of those days"Depressing, but with incredible imagery and language.I like. |
| Curiosa 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseI don't usually review a lot, but I always check the material of a writer who reviews mine. Your work changed that. I love the imagery and the way the language flows. I also love the line "It was one of those days" and it was quite intelligent of you to repeat to emphasize the them. Lovely. |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2006-07-12 ch 1, | abuseWOW.the metaphors. the flow. the...everything.this was excellent. X Anita (please review back) |