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Reviews For: One of Those Days

wishing/dreaming/waiting
2006-10-12
ch 1,
abuseVery dramatic. Not too much description, but just enough imagery to make me shudder. And shiver. I shuddered and shivered. Good job.
lady-in-the-mirror
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuse"It was one of those days"Depressing, but with incredible imagery and language.I like.
Curiosa
2006-07-13
ch 1,
abuseI don't usually review a lot, but I always check the material of a writer who reviews mine. Your work changed that. I love the imagery and the way the language flows. I also love the line "It was one of those days" and it was quite intelligent of you to repeat to emphasize the them. Lovely.
Kaitlyn J. Richards
2006-07-12
ch 1,
abuseWOW.the metaphors. the flow. the...everything.this was excellent.

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